Monday, May 30, 2011

Entertainment Design Wk 1 and 2 (Paint-Overs)

Yo man, I did some really quick paint-overs to show the revisions I would make to your paintings.


For ths painting, I brought the objects in closer and I added a sunset in the middle to fill up the space.  I also added a little min-bar to the right to give the painting some interest and life.  Plus I added more details and I added more contrast to punch up the sunset. 

The original painting you had lacked hiearchy, so I adjusted the perpsective to bring the blue pods with the guy climbing up the ladded to the foreground.  I also pushed back the green glowy light to added some depth. 

These are just some really quick revsions I'd make.  I hope these help. 


1 comment:

  1. Thanks man. Yea I totally got the same crits from Steve. First one was too blown out and empty. The second one I completely agree. I had good composition and mood, but having two of the reads split across a bridge ruins the 1,2,3 read. Keep me updated with your shit too.

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