Nice! I like it. I personally think the composition and design looks good. It's a cool angle and I dig the ship design. I like the Mexican flag. haha!
I think it would be cooler to maybe add a few elements in the background near the light source, but make them super desaturated and light so that they don't distract from the main focus. I think that adding those very faint elements in the background will give it some depth.
Also, if you have time, I would try and figure out the designs for the elements surrounding the ship, like that base which the vehicle hovers over, and the control panel where that distant figure is standing next to. You dont' have to get too detailed, but I think at least paint them out as simpe blocks in perspective. They look kinda muddy right now.
Also, you might want to punch up your cast shadows. Right now, it kinda looks like the objects don't have any.
dope! My input is to try getting more experimental with your forms, or the environment. I think angular = scifi and that's been done lots, but what other alternate future form languages are there? Also I think it could use more 'energy'. For example, what if you put pilots running toward the ship instead of people standing still? That would be telling me a story as the viewer, and would keep my attention longer.
Nice! I like it. I personally think the composition and design looks good. It's a cool angle and I dig the ship design. I like the Mexican flag. haha!
ReplyDeleteI think it would be cooler to maybe add a few elements in the background near the light source, but make them super desaturated and light so that they don't distract from the main focus. I think that adding those very faint elements in the background will give it some depth.
Also, if you have time, I would try and figure out the designs for the elements surrounding the ship, like that base which the vehicle hovers over, and the control panel where that distant figure is standing next to. You dont' have to get too detailed, but I think at least paint them out as simpe blocks in perspective. They look kinda muddy right now.
Also, you might want to punch up your cast shadows. Right now, it kinda looks like the objects don't have any.
Otherwise, I'm digging it.
dope! My input is to try getting more experimental with your forms, or the environment. I think angular = scifi and that's been done lots, but what other alternate future form languages are there? Also I think it could use more 'energy'. For example, what if you put pilots running toward the ship instead of people standing still? That would be telling me a story as the viewer, and would keep my attention longer.
ReplyDeleteDo you like my non-technical crit? hehe